Wednesday, 24 November 2021

Learning how to write a good blog comment.


We are learning how to make a quality blog comment.


 This was my comment: Hello I’m a student of Waitara High School and I am also learning manaiakalani, I really like the colours you used and mixed together, I feel like I have seen that sky before. I’d recommend adding some more light colours like green or purple but I enjoyed looking at your work and guessing how it was made, did you find it hard to do?

There are five parts of a comment that makes it a good one, These are: Greeting, Positive, Helpful, Thoughtful and a question. I have highlighted where these are in my own comment.

The greeting is yellow, Positive is green,  Helpful is blue, Thoughtful is pink, Red is the question.


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