Learning how to write a good blog comment.

We are learning how to make a quality blog comment.

 This was my comment: Hello I’m a student of Waitara High School and I am also learning manaiakalani, I really like the colours you used and mixed together, I feel like I have seen that sky before. I’d recommend adding some more light colours like green or purple but I enjoyed looking at your work and guessing how it was made, did you find it hard to do?

There are five parts of a comment that makes it a good one, These are: Greeting, Positive, Helpful, Thoughtful and a question. I have highlighted where these are in my own comment.

The greeting is yellow, Positive is green,  Helpful is blue, Thoughtful is pink, Red is the question.

Ugly Goblin Shark - Polyline

WALT: Learn how to write a quality blogpost

We also were learning how to use the polyline tool in google drawing to make cartoon versions of images.

I decided to use the image of a goblin shark to cartoonify. 

It was extremely difficult to use the tool as you couldn't make curves with it. It was difficult to find the correct colours as well but I tried a few times and decided on this colour. ( Actual goblin sharks are a kind of purple )

 

Firemans' last day

 We have been learning how to make an animation to then learn how to put onto it our blog.

We have learned this because it will be a useful skill in later school years

I think the idea of my animation was a good one and I think I executed it well, If I had to change anything I'd put more detail into it so the overall animation flowed better.

Business dude drawing.

 We were learning how to create a character on google drawings using PNG images and the shape tools.

I created this person using PNG images for his hair and hat, using the shape tool to create everything else. If I had more time I would have detailed the shirt and shoes. I would have added detail on the suitcase and put him in a more challenging pose to create. I did have a problem with the hair and hat so I took the easy way and chose to use PNG images for it instead of wasting the majority of the time on those aspects.

Introducing myself

 Hello, My name is Kaysha-lee. I live in Taranaki and go to Waitara high school

 I have three siblings, two brothers and one sister.

I am good at literacy and I enjoy reading, drawing, writing and playing video games. I struggle with Math but try my hardest with it. My goals for this year are to get excellence and merits on all my assessments and to get better in my maths work.

I aspire to go to the University of Wellington and become a therapist, I’d like to move to New Plymouth after all of my schooling and do my therapy there.

I hope to achieve high standards in all of my schooling.

Kia Ora